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Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts

Friday, November 2, 2018

Comic spripe

Hello fellow bloggers
Today we reading the book called The legend of  Rock, Paper, Scissors. After we read the story we had to create a comic spripe. I made  a book v.s a ball of fluff. Here is my comic:


Wednesday, October 31, 2018

Wxplanation Writing Term 4

kia ora
Yesterday we had to write an expaniaion about environmental problems. Here is mine:
Name: Jessica
Explanation Writing - Term 4

Prompt: - - Write to describe one environmental problem and explain what people do to reduce its impact on the planet.

Think about:
  • What your reader needs to know about the topic
  • How you are going to introduce the topic
  • The order of your ideas and how you link them
  • What to include in your summary

Remember to:
  • Choose your words carefully
  • Take care with your spelling, punctuation, and sentences
  • Edit - add or delete words or sentences to improve your work


Start Writing Here:
People have to deal with rubbish. Rubbish is an environmental problem. The environment is the world around you and me. Rubbish is a wrapping or old piece of plastic.

Firstly rubbish looks like food to an animal. The animal eats it up and the rubbish will block up their stocahe, and so their dead.  You can help the poor animals by picking up your rubbish and putting it in the bin.

Secondly some good people recycle. By recycling you stop tons of rubbish going to landfill. Landfill is a huge hole in the ground that all your goes into. Landfill is not at all good for the environment because it is full of plastic and is degradable which means it won’t rot away.

Thirdly, people burn where rubbish. That means they are releasing gases into the atmosphere and the gas are also speeding up global warming. Which is some of the air pollution and is all so the smoke from the fire is bad for your lungs.


So there you have it rubish is a very bad problem. So if you put your rubbish in the bin,start recycling and stop burning rubbish we will have a healthy planet.


Thursday, October 18, 2018

Grands and grands peom

Kia ora
Tomorrow is Great and Grands day at Ohaeawai School! And I have made a peom about my great Aunt and Uncle. I hope you enjoy it. 

Thursday, September 27, 2018

Tongariro National Park

Kia ora
Since we got back from the ski trip we have been making slideshows about Tongariro National Park. I hope you enjoy reading mine.






Tuesday, September 25, 2018

Daily Diary

Kia ora
After we got back from the ski trip we wrote a diary about our time. Here is my diary I hope you enjoy.




Tuesday, August 14, 2018

Pear deck 2

Hello fellow bloggers
We have been doing some work on Pear deck. Pear deck is a site that my class and I use in writing time to help us get better at writing. Here is snapshot of my work:





Tuesday, August 7, 2018

Pear Deck

Kia ora
We have been using Pear Deck to help us learn more about sentence structure so that we can get better at noticing where one sentence ends and another one begins. This should also help us get better scores for punctuation. This a screenshot of an activity we did: first we had to highlight the noun and verb parts of the sentences and then we had to decide where the full stops and capital letters should go.

Jessica

Tuesday, July 24, 2018

Whoohoo!! Term 3

Sweet!! Term 3 has arrived and my classmates and me are back at school for another term full of learning. I'm very refreshed after a two week holiday. In the holidays I did heaps of stuff, but one of my highlights would have to be going to my aunty and uncle's farm. It's the best time of year to go because it's calving season which means I get a pet calf but at the moment I don't get one because I already have two rabbits. Their names are Caramel and Ash. In the calf shed I have a connection with this  black calf I named Pepper. I am looking forward to the term ahead of us. On the 25th of August is the ski trip and I am really excited about the ski trip because I have never seen snow before. 

Friday, June 8, 2018

waittangi experience

Kia ora
Yesterday we went to Waitangi museum. There we learned about the Battle of Taiamai. Here is a slide about my experience.

Monday, May 21, 2018

Pink shirt day

Kia ora
On friday it was pink shirt day. The pink shirts mean anti-bullying. Some of the boys were dressed in pink dresses. I was dressed in a pink T-shirt and a pink skirt my friend Indi was wearing a pink hula skirt and pink afro wig. Pink shirt day was so much fun.

Friday, May 11, 2018

Autumn poem

Hello fellow bloggers
Yesterday we went outside and obesved the nature around us. We had to choose a tree or leaf to write about. I chose a very tall tree. Here is my writing:


Wednesday, March 21, 2018

smilies Horses

Hello
Last week my class and I were learning about smilies. We made a three sentence including the three smilies as,like and than. Here is mine

Wednesday, March 14, 2018

smilies writing

Kia ora
Today in class we have been learning about smilies and how to use them in our writing. I created a DLO ( Digital Learning Object ). This is what we did, 1. we were given some pictures from the internet, 2. we had to find  pick two pictures and write smilies about them.
Here are my smilies:



 

Friday, February 16, 2018

Writing Poetry: Lesson 1 Bio Poem

hello fellow bloggers
We have been learning about poetry with Mrs B and Mrs Craig. We wrote Some bio poems. Here is mine.

Thursday, July 27, 2017

foaming and fizzing

Hello fellow bloggers

This term our theme is Up,up and away. That means we are learning about science. We did an experiment  where we had to taste baking soda and vinegar yuck! We mixed them together and recorded and what happened.


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yuk and yum
QUESTION.

If we mix vinegar and baking soda what would the reaction?
THESIS.
Vinegar tastes sour and it is a liquid. Baking soda is solid,soft white powder and it tastes salty and horrible .they are both  food substances but based on their different taste ,they must be chemically different . so if they are mixed together,there might be a chemical reaction
HYPOTHESIS.
We predict that when we mix vinegar with baking soda an observable  chemical reaction will occur . we might see and hear an explosion ,fire,foaming,bubbles .fizzing or something else . the resulting mixture might look and taste different . there might even be a difference in size of materials

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AND MATERIALS:
Half teaspoon baking soda
Vinegar
Container for mixing
Teaspoon for mixing
PROCEDURE
Step 1: pour some vinegar into a container to depth of about 2cm
Step 2: use  a teaspoon to measure in half a teaspoon of baking soda.
Step 3: mix with a teaspoon.
Step 4: Observe and record what happens.
OBSERVATIONS:
At step 2 the mixture started to fizz. A fizzing sound was heard,bubbles were seen to appear in the mixture and the materials rose higher in the container. At step 3,when the materials were mixed even more bubbles appeared and the volume of the materials in the container rose even higher.when the mixture was tasted the taste was unpleasant and was similar to the baking soda

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CONCLUSION
The goal of this experiment was to see if an observable reaction would take place  when vinegar  and baking soda were mixed together . the result of our experiment proves that our hypothesis was  correct we predicted that there would be an observable reaction ,  and there was. There was lots of foaming and fizzing happening and bubbles appeared which means a gas must have been produced. A quick check online showed us that the gas was carbon dioxide.

Friday, June 30, 2017

zoo

Kia ora
This week we went to Auckland zoo for a sleepover. We slept in the old elephant house. This is a photo of some of the animals we saw.










I am working on an anmal report about Otters.It was bigger than I thought it would be.

Monday, June 19, 2017

Handwriting

                                 Handwriting
Kia ora bloggers.

We have been learning how to write in cursive font. Here are some photos of my curvy handwiting.

(p.s. I'm still getting the hang of it.)

My speech.

Kia ora bloggers,
I am presenting you my speech so read it though. If you agree, comment.



                                     Big cats


What is the point in killing our biggest cats? Just for the skin? It might make you rich but still. Poaching leads to extinction and extinction means that they don’t get a chance to live a full and happy life

Firstly, I believe when you poach our big cats there are less and less and one day you’ll wipe out a whole species of big cat. I believe the fastest animals in the world are going extinct and they’re cheetahs.  I mean it, you’ll wipe out lions,leopards,cheetahs and several more species.
If one species goes extinct, it has a flow on effect to other species. Animals are part of a food chain and if you effect the food chain some other animals might die too.

Finally I believe our big cats should live because there is really no point in killing big cats just to make a handbag or a coat or a mat. When they are alive, they can amaze tourists, they can reproduce to add more cats to the wild. Big
cats are much better alive than dead!

So are you with me or not? Because big cats  deserve a  better life than being killed and turned into a handbag I think tourists would really like to see a big cat but if there are no big cats then the poachers are to blame. But just remember once there are no big cats there are no other animals to complete the food chain
  




Friday, June 16, 2017

Fun Friday.

Hi fellow bloggers

Today is Fun Friday and my goup has created a game called SLIME PRIZE. This is how you play.
1.First you put your hand in the bucket
2.Second you try and find the dice  
Here are the people in my group: Braeden,Indi,Deevon,Crystal,Honey,Louisa and Sara,Cerys and me.
   





                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                          

Friday, June 2, 2017

Onesie Day

Kia ora
Today we had an animal onesie  day because we are fundraising for the year 1 and 2 zoo trip. Our group dressed up as humans. Humans are part of the ape family.