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Wednesday, October 31, 2018

Wxplanation Writing Term 4

kia ora
Yesterday we had to write an expaniaion about environmental problems. Here is mine:
Name: Jessica
Explanation Writing - Term 4

Prompt: - - Write to describe one environmental problem and explain what people do to reduce its impact on the planet.

Think about:
  • What your reader needs to know about the topic
  • How you are going to introduce the topic
  • The order of your ideas and how you link them
  • What to include in your summary

Remember to:
  • Choose your words carefully
  • Take care with your spelling, punctuation, and sentences
  • Edit - add or delete words or sentences to improve your work


Start Writing Here:
People have to deal with rubbish. Rubbish is an environmental problem. The environment is the world around you and me. Rubbish is a wrapping or old piece of plastic.

Firstly rubbish looks like food to an animal. The animal eats it up and the rubbish will block up their stocahe, and so their dead.  You can help the poor animals by picking up your rubbish and putting it in the bin.

Secondly some good people recycle. By recycling you stop tons of rubbish going to landfill. Landfill is a huge hole in the ground that all your goes into. Landfill is not at all good for the environment because it is full of plastic and is degradable which means it won’t rot away.

Thirdly, people burn where rubbish. That means they are releasing gases into the atmosphere and the gas are also speeding up global warming. Which is some of the air pollution and is all so the smoke from the fire is bad for your lungs.


So there you have it rubish is a very bad problem. So if you put your rubbish in the bin,start recycling and stop burning rubbish we will have a healthy planet.


Thursday, October 18, 2018

Grands and grands peom

Kia ora
Tomorrow is Great and Grands day at Ohaeawai School! And I have made a peom about my great Aunt and Uncle. I hope you enjoy it.